This week your homework is to use the word bank below to write an emotive paragraph. Use the comment box to write in and follow the instructions in your homework book.
The little boy was so petrified, he could barely move. With his heart pounding, he tried to step forward, but his feet seemed to be stuck to the ground. Suddenly, he heard a spine chilling sound:was it wolves howling or something much more terrifying? He wanted to scream his heart out, but he knew he had to stay as quiet as a mouse.
154The little boy was so petrified, he could barely move. With his heart pounding, he tried to step forward, but his feet seemed to be stuck to the ground. Suddenly, he heard a spine chilling sound:was it wolves howling or something much more terrifying? He wanted to scream his heart out, but he knew he had to stay as quiet as a mouse.
I felt brave like a wolf as i made my way home my heart thumping like a giant banging on the floor. Three more steps and iam at the front door. Iam home, i made it. by Lenny Y 3S
I felt brave like a wolf as i made my way home my heart thumping like a giant banging on the floor. Three more steps and iam at the front door. Iam home, i made it. by Lenny Y 3S
Should he? Anxiously the young, pale boy stood in front of the threatening, colossal, fiery red door. He was petrified, frightened by the whispering in his ears. Nervously the boy took a step back from the big, blood red door when suddenly he heard a creak! He hoped it was his imagination, then he saw the door he realised that it wasn't his imagination it was the crooked door it had creaked open but he didn't want to go in. His heart was pounding like a drum and he could feel the blood rushing in his head! He was about to open the door when….. kalie
I went for a walk in the huge park with my baby sister. I was pushing her pram and singing to her. She was enjoying it very much. Suddenly a big dog started running towards us, I was afraid that it would bite my baby sister because recently i heard about foxes eating babies in the newspapers. I began running like a cheetah, I just wanted to save my baby sister.
I went for a walk in the huge park with my baby sister. I was pushing her pram and singing to her. She was enjoying it very much. Suddenly a big dog started running towards us, I was afraid that it would bite my baby sister because recently i heard about foxes eating babies in the newspapers. I began running like a cheetah, I just wanted to save my baby sister.
Little boy was Worried he heard heavy footsteps crunching up the long path. He was terrified and as scared as mouse. His heart was beating but he was curious as detective. Thinking of a dad he opened the vanished red door. He asked, is dad behind the door with gran? He was confused, scared as a mouse and shivering like a snowman. Defeated he gazed into granny’s window and saw his granny was a monster. Jumping nervously he thought he saw a twenty vicious red cat eyes. His heart was thumping like a giant banging on the floor, terrified he ran like a cheetah. Shikhar Yadav Y3S
The little boy was horrified,panicking,petrified he was shivering like a leaf and he was cold as snow finally he made it at grandmars house the creaked open. an in grammars. bed was a burgala .he was so scared somewon noked on the door. he opend it and it was dad and they both ran home together.
Apoligies for the problem some of you had with putting your homework on fronter, I have sorted the problem and hope there won't be any more problems. thank you to all the children who posted their work, some really good reading with lots of descriptive writing, again well done.
The tiny boy was sadly walking and he felt petrified.he got to the door and knocked on the door.He heard a worrying creaky voice that did't sound like grandma.As he walked in he shouted that you don't look like grandma.
Shivering like a penguin ,angry He stood as stiff as toffee. Jumping nervously, he thought he saw a twenty vicious red cats eye's!!!!!!!!!!!!??. Running like a bull ,he was terrified as a scaredy cat
I felt brave like wolf,my heart frozen like ice.the town. petrified of who i was,the town worried and petrified of what i had become,the farmer his heart beating he stood shivering like a penquin.then i thought of my family and retreated deep into the woods feeling homesick i left. kam
I felt brave like wolf,my heart frozen like ice.the town. petrified of who i was,the town worried and petrified of what i had become,the farmer his heart beating he stood shivering like a penquin.then i thought of my family and retreated deep into the woods feeling homesick i left. kam
20 comments:
Great homework
Great homework Mrs Sangha. It was easy peasy.
The little boy was so petrified, he could barely move. With his heart pounding, he tried to step forward, but his feet seemed to be stuck to the ground. Suddenly, he heard a spine chilling sound:was it wolves howling or something much more terrifying? He wanted to scream his heart out, but he knew he had to stay as quiet as a mouse.
Rihanna
154The little boy was so petrified, he could barely move. With his heart pounding, he tried to step forward, but his feet seemed to be stuck to the ground. Suddenly, he heard a spine chilling sound:was it wolves howling or something much more terrifying? He wanted to scream his heart out, but he knew he had to stay as quiet as a mouse.
Rihanna
I felt brave like a wolf as i made my way home my heart thumping like a giant banging on the floor. Three more steps and iam at the front door. Iam home, i made it. by Lenny Y 3S
I felt brave like a wolf as i made my way home my heart thumping like a giant banging on the floor. Three more steps and iam at the front door. Iam home, i made it. by Lenny Y 3S
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by michaela
Great homework Mrs Sangha. It was easy peasy.
-Hem
Is dad behind the door with gran? He was terrified his granny was a monster. Brave like a wolf, thinking of dad he opened the varnished red door.
by Natalie
Should he?
Anxiously the young, pale boy stood in front of the threatening, colossal, fiery red door. He was petrified, frightened by the whispering in his ears. Nervously the boy took a step back from the big, blood red door when suddenly he heard a creak! He hoped it was his imagination, then he saw the door he realised that it wasn't his imagination it was the crooked door it had creaked open but he didn't want to go in. His heart was pounding like a drum and he could feel the blood rushing in his head! He was about to open the door when…..
kalie
I went for a walk in the huge park with my baby sister. I was pushing her pram and singing to her. She was enjoying it very much. Suddenly a big dog started running towards us, I was afraid that it would bite my baby sister because recently i heard about foxes eating babies in the newspapers. I began running like a cheetah, I just wanted to save my baby sister.
Rizwan
I went for a walk in the huge park with my baby sister. I was pushing her pram and singing to her. She was enjoying it very much. Suddenly a big dog started running towards us, I was afraid that it would bite my baby sister because recently i heard about foxes eating babies in the newspapers. I began running like a cheetah, I just wanted to save my baby sister.
Rizwan
Little boy was Worried he heard heavy footsteps crunching up the long path. He was terrified and as scared as mouse. His heart was beating but he was curious as detective. Thinking of a dad he opened the vanished red door. He asked, is dad behind the door with gran? He was confused, scared as a mouse and shivering like a snowman. Defeated he gazed into granny’s window and saw his granny was a monster. Jumping nervously he thought he saw a twenty vicious red cat eyes. His heart was thumping like a giant banging on the floor, terrified he ran like a cheetah.
Shikhar Yadav Y3S
The little boy was horrified,panicking,petrified he was shivering like a leaf and he was cold as snow finally he made it at grandmars house the creaked open. an in grammars. bed was a burgala .he was so scared somewon noked on the door. he opend it and it was dad and they both ran home together.
Apoligies for the problem some of you had with putting your homework on fronter, I have sorted the problem and hope there won't be any more problems.
thank you to all the children who posted their work, some really good reading with lots of descriptive writing, again well done.
The tiny boy was sadly walking and he felt petrified.he got to the door and knocked on the door.He heard a worrying creaky voice that did't
sound like grandma.As he walked in he shouted that you don't look like grandma.
Libby C
INTO THE DARK 05 October
Shivering like a penguin ,angry He stood as stiff as toffee.
Jumping nervously, he thought he saw a twenty vicious red cats eye's!!!!!!!!!!!!??.
Running like a bull ,he was terrified as a scaredy cat
Caitlin H
I felt brave like wolf,my heart frozen like ice.the town. petrified of who i was,the town worried and petrified of what i had become,the farmer his heart beating he stood shivering like a penquin.then i thought of my family and retreated deep into the woods feeling homesick i left. kam
I felt brave like wolf,my heart frozen like ice.the town. petrified of who i was,the town worried and petrified of what i had become,the farmer his heart beating he stood shivering like a penquin.then i thought of my family and retreated deep into the woods feeling homesick i left. kam
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